Emerson

I'm writing a novel about world war two... much less war, though, and more concentration camp. Though war novels interest me, that specific time period doesn't. And, like Jack, I'm ...

This is a really interesting song idea, since it is rather unique. As you know, I'm not much on song lyrics, but I'll still give you my thoughts. ^_^ I ...

Hahah, Kit, darling, only you are so witty as to write something like that. Do not tell me I am the genius, when it is truly you who seems to ...

I'm excited. ^_^ I need to gather the address for my local newspaper. And, as well, perhaps my school newspaper could do something for it? Hm...

I don't think you're a poopy head, Suz. Thank you, Tri. ^_^ It makes more sense in context: "I wish I could write poetry, but no, I'm just a poo ...

Wow. I suppose this is the bashing I deserve for something horrible I did while under a spell of "I won't remember this tomorrow"?

Are you calling me a hag? Because I am not an old hag.

Yeah, it was my inspiration from a poor mid-dinner snack of toast!

You captured the setting true, but what are you trying to say to me, the reader? I didn't like it much, perhaps because you're just showing us a setting, and ...

It was taken out of context. And you realize I am not Clau? XD

I think you could have a whole lot more imagery. If you're talking about the sun, there is so much to show the reader; and I didn't see a whole ...

I'm eating toast. Toast Which is why I boast about cooking roast. And I love toast the most because it is a host A host that is lost cause. 'Cause. ...

This seems to have the exact same problem as the other poem I read by you. It makes no sense and I cannot discern what you are talking about. I ...

Oh, what am I to say? Well, first, this isn't a story. I am sorry to break your heart. A story consists of a beginning, a middle, and an end. ...

It's hard to say what you think about a poem when you can't understand it. Your poem seems to have beauty, but I can't really tell. I can't understand it. ...