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Re: How was your teenage life. Or life as a teenager so far.
I'm not sure what this is supposed to be? XD My teenage life has been rather weird but nothing that needs to be said on a public forum. ^_^ Currently, ...
Dec 24, 2007 -
Re: Darkness
Before I get into the critique, welcome to YWS! I know you're new, so perhaps you haven't looked over the rules yet? It's suggested that you critique two things before ...
Dec 24, 2007 -
Re: Chimped Out Users No Longer Second Class Citizens
XD Yay!
Dec 24, 2007 -
Re: NaNoWriYe!!
Oh my gosh no... I'm still working on my novel from November. XD
Dec 24, 2007 -
Re: asphyxiation
With her heart in her mouth, she spoke. Words lined up in her throat like teenagers eager to jump off a bridge. Her tongue flicked and flied, the perfect spring ...
Dec 24, 2007 -
Re: The Fatal Poem!
Maybe it was her time, maybe it was fiat. Fiat? Though it is a word I do think you meant to say fate. and the last two sounds u heard ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: and so this ends.
I think I understand it but at the same time I am not entirely sure... and that is why I can't exactly say I like this poem. It was pretty, ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Hola, you literary-inclined kids! Interested in film?
Hey! Welcome to the site. What kind of movies do you enjoy? I'm an oldie person with movies. I love Bogart and Cagney, Hitchcock and all that. I like new ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
Jack, haha, navel fiction is a lot cooler than chick lit. I finally finished The Idiot last night! Yay for me! So now I am reading The World of Null-A ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here (4)
Saint, that is awesome. And Hamish is an awesome name. Hahah. And the poor bird...? That's rather strange, though.
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Her<You<Me
Well, Via already caught onto the annoying repetition... in poetry, repetition should be used (or it is taught to be used for) giving meaning and enphasis to something, rather than ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Hello, it's me.
This is interesting but... I am not so sure I like it. It's kind of hard for me to grasp at what you were trying to write about. War, I ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Hi! I'm a writer with moderate exp. attempting an epic job!
Welcome to the site! Seems you fit on the older end of YWS. ;-) If you have any questions or find yourself lost among the scary place that is the ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Rory Legend
Welcome to YWS ^_^ Like all the other mods will say: if you need help or find yourself particularly lost or with a question, feel free to Pm me. Enjoy ...
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: Third Concerto
I'm not going to have much to say on this, haha. I love the music held behind this; and how it is easy to see that it could only be ...
Dec 23, 2007