Emerson

I'm reading this book called When you Catch an Adjective, Kill it: the parts of speech for better and/or worse by Ben Yagoda. I suggest it not only for its ...

You look kind of scary. ...

Alright, well... No, is about all I can say. Poetry (usually) is in verse, or if it isn't going to be in verse, learn the rules before you break them. ...

Poetry isn't meant to be a "woe-is-me" fest. True it is an expression of your emotions, but is an act of sharing them with the reader, not crying on them ...

First off, welcome to YWS! Be sure to keep in mind that for everyone one thing you post you should also review two. We have a post-to-review ration of 2:1. ...

The line breaks are really short, creating an annoying start-stop effect. To be completely honest, this is like a note to a best friend which you emailed to them on ...

Hmmm I never noticed people spamming the blogs. Oh well, thanks for fixing it? ^_^

Ah, the thing I forgot: hide it in a drawer. For a week, a month, a year, a decade. Just hide it and forget it. Then, when you think you ...

Camille, you're beautiful. ^_^ You're so cute! hehe. Sweetie, despite just-woke-up syndrome, you are also adorable.

Hmm well, I am assuming it is your first draft of your novel? The only advice I can have is to spend several years editing, haha. Honestly though, your first ...

Yes, if you waited a week or so, you would get 300 points again. Tah-da, so to speak. Maybe we could try making it part of the sign up process ...

You have all these beautiful images, but what is the subject of the poem? It is like the other one. It is beautiful, but what point are you trying to ...

Gwen, Patient is a virtue, love. I'm pretty sure Nate doesn't know when he is going to do this. January was a guess. He is busy with a lot of ...

Hmmm I think I'm going to do this critique in two parts. ^_^ One, harsh evil me, two, sympathetic and knowing me. One Even if it is about an important ...

I think the line breaks were too sudden. It felt really weird to read...I know it has a subject, but through most of it I am thinking, "This is all ...