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Re: tear drops on my open hand
I'm incredebly torn with this. It was well written, that I can't entirely deny...But why not give us more ? It's just a paragraph. I don't know who she is, ...
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: My story
That's what Will does to me every time I look at him. This seems like a really wrong place to start. It's like you forgot several paragraphs before hand. What ...
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Re: Blackbird
Edited; please don't put caps in your subject title. ^_^
Jan 8, 2008 -
Re: The Movie for Twilight (Part Two)
*moved to fanfiction*
Jan 8, 2008 -
Re: The Movie for Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
I'm going to move this to should probably have been moved there long ago, haha. Oh well.
Jan 8, 2008 -
Re: Agent or Publisher: who do I contact first?
Keep in mind I haven't published either, but I've read a lot on the topic. ^_^ Go for the agent. Just like an actor's agent, they will hunt out the ...
Jan 8, 2008 -
Re: The Holy Man
Heheh, that is really interesting! You have a great idea to start with, but it has just a few issues. Your rhyme scheme makes reading the poem a bit jarring--it ...
Jan 8, 2008 -
Re: A Flight of Stairs
It's late, and my glasses aren't on. Letters are blurring together, but it is still beautiful. ^_^ Your imagery, metaphor, and silly, ridiculous images all keep this poem right in ...
Jan 8, 2008 -
Re: A Possible Big Change To Stories & Poems
People would probably stop posting there if it cost 150 points per post. It would only cost 150 to start a thread.
Jan 8, 2008 -
Re: 10 year old outsmarts us all?
This is the only article I could find on it... Although, you say, "by loose" is this a Joke news or a real news or..?
Jan 8, 2008 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
I said a killed a man because he was a traitor, but really I killed him because he knew I was the guilty one. - Armin. What is your "Worst ...
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: Are You Excited About The Young Writers Journal?
I'm excited! I just mailed my contract off today... *slow* I see now why you said mid January or February. The slow pokes will be keeping you behind.
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
A beautiful women, alcohol, and several packs of cigarettes. Where doesn't really matter so long as no one will wonder in, or around. - Ludger. I would want to be ...
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: My Crazy Depression
Listen to Camille (Ayra) she's a smart one! First off, you need to know that there is a big difference between poetry and journal writing/blog posts. like Camille said: why ...
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: read me like a book
I thynk u shld tak lyke a normyl prsn. Yeah? This is a writing site, please use real English. I also suggest you crack a collection of poems and read ...
Jan 7, 2008
