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Grammar Bullies Video I thought this was hilarious... (The joys of Video Stumble Upon!) I'd say it's either PG or PG-13. Not real bad, just some thing that are said ...

You can also get a general idea of what kind of length your favorite novel is by doing this: Count the words per line (which usually is anywhere from ten, ...

I nodded eagerly[s], excitement flooding my veins[/s]. I think you could survive without this part. I know how tempting it is to say something like that (I do it too!) ...

Melja has a point, so for your internet safety, I edited it out. :) Please, stay safe when online and do not give out your full name or contact info!

I read this in 8th grade, and this book depressed everyone, but it really upset me. There were so many places I wanted to cry. My great aunt is mentally ...

Words can drive a person mad, Then over to happy and sad. Happy and sad are bland words. They're flat. Be colorful in your word choice. But no, I say ...

I will just be entirely honest and say I did not like it. Which is OK because I will tell you why so you can fix it. This was just ...

Maybe this was mentioned somewhere else and I am a silly person but we do not get review points for reviewing in AC?

I have to say that I think Snoink is a fool for not loving Karl. And who cares if Mick is normal? He's a creep. And I think I would ...

Lie together indiscriminately, Red and gold and blue and green. indiscriminately is an ugly word, and the last line here is kind of ugly too. What's poetic about a list ...

A hand is the perfect girlfriend, Ronald Lynch thought as he stormed into the room he and his mother shared, slamming the door behind him. He knew the folks who ...

he world is fucked up, Carolina Smith thought as she sat down in her second period math class. If this is the first thing your reader is going to see ...

Samantha, you look cute with brown hair! And, awesome baby, Via :D

Hey Rose! I haven't seen you in forever, so I thought it would only be kind to rekick off our friendship with a critique. ^_^ “Hey,” a car pulled up ...

yeah, like Nate said, you don't need to know it... I'm going to college in a little over a year and I'm still not entirely sure what I will do. ...