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Re: Fernatical
It's pretty writing, but I don't see what it is doing for me and why I should care. Also, that is all it is. Pretty writing. Where is the thing ...
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: Advanced Critiques Questions
The rules just means that your complete story (not the parts you post it in) needs to be more than 5k.
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: NOOBO, want's to say Hello! =O
Ew. n00bz. :D joke! Welcome to YWS. You know, you could be a taste tester for occupation. If you have any questions about the site or need help finding your ...
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: D is for Diphtheria
Bwahah. My eyes did not burn with the "wrong chapter" although this one made more sense. Have fun editing! And, oh, how I cannot wait for Todd to actually appear.
Jan 23, 2008 -
Re: Heath Ledger Found Dead!
Well, my world isn't shattered, but this is real depressing. He was a good actor. It's a bit creepy that he won't be alive for the airing of The Dark ...
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: J
Welcome to YWS! Not an idiot, eh? I suppose that is good. If you have any questions or need help finding something around the site feel free to Pm me ...
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: reading accelerator
You can't read the words in your head, just look at them. As my friend told me, don't doubt the power of your mind. You can remember the word you ...
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: so this is what its like to be in love
Eep! keep in mind that bumping up your posts isn't good! This was OK. I loved the imagery you used with the rose shaking off its dew, but the ending ...
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: Mental Masturbation
Alright, well, I'll get past the fact that I'm insulted and try to critique this. Why not, instead of preaching to your reader, you try to present to them why ...
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: wounds
Woah. First off, your line breaks are way too short. And for that matter, what are you trying to say? This is really all that can be gotten out of ...
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: reading accelerator
If anyone else is like me, you read slow and wish you read faster. I found this and thought it might help others train their eyes: Reading Accelerator . After ...
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: What do I call my baddies?
Bah, you're not an idiot. ;-) I found links that might help you! Your Monster Name dictionary Name Generators
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: What do I call my baddies?
Hey there. ^_^ I edited your title--please do not use bad words on YWS! Also, caps in titles are annoying, and I also removed the excess punctuation. You could try ...
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: YWS wallpaper
Sorry about that Via! Geocities likes to throw fits, so I moved them to flickr. They should work now.
Jan 22, 2008 -
Re: YWS wallpaper
Yep! Type writer font. And I would do something not black but that particular font doesn't look good in anything but black. -_-
Jan 22, 2008
