Emerson

"In this essay I am going to..." When it comes to literary essays, that is worse than nails on chalkboards. :lol: You did two things you should never ever ever ...

I think this is a good start for a poem! But you need some things to spice it up. You describe anger so plainly, why not use metaphors and imagery, ...

Moved to other fiction. You don't post your own works here, love. :D

*pokes people* You sillies, you're not supposed to nominate people here!

I think this is in the wrong place? So I'm going to move it to Other Fiction. If you want it somewhere else, just say so! :D

Happy birthday love. :)

Welcome to the site fellow! If you have any questions or need help finding your way around feel free to contact me. I'm sure someone else said that already. ^_~

Karim smiled to himself. This part confuses me about where the narrator is stranding--where is he standing so that he can view what is going on in the car but ...

it would be best if we made peace that we might never find his killer.” This sentence is grammatically scratching my eyes. I think you need to say "it would ...

I heard about this while I was away, which was kind of weird, because I was real isolated from [current American] news while on the trip. But this was a ...

This is actually kind of weird. One of the current event seminars was on Kosovo, and then just a few days later, it isn't current anymore. But that is the ...

I think a lot of people are going to find the generators useful. :) You're so progressive!

I don't know. I kind of like it, but I think it was done way too fast and it could have so much more power, or at least, more impact ...

Well, though this may have been entertaining to write, it's not particularly entertaining to read. Sorry to be harsh--but don't post something you aren't serious about. That means don't post ...

Adam, you look hot. XD Was that other picture of you [if I am remembering correctly Oo] old? You were sitting in a desk and looked.. nothing like that. Or ...