Emerson

Bon anniversaire! J'éspère que tu as une bonne année! Qu'est ce que as-tu reçu? [I'm not sure that makes sense. Oo]

Well, it's winter, too. Although that doesn't account for 17 in one year and in the same area. But it is a fact that suicide rates rise in the winter.

That's strange and sad. I don't know whether I wish there was a connection so it made sense, or didn't. Either way...I'll pray for their souls and their families.

He unbolted the door, to find – A blunt figure standing on his porch, coldly gazing at him. I don't like the format of this. You don't need the dash ...

From my understanding, communism looks amazing on paper. But it is easy to look at history and see it that it is a complete failure in the real world.

Welcome to the site! :D You'll find others Aussies to hang out with. They're awesome people! I can see everyone else already beat you with the rule book. O_O So ...

i'm sorry, I forgot to mention that I meant White History Month for America not the whole world. I forgot that this website was international. Uh, what? Honestly, that confuses ...

Hello! I only did about half of the first section. I'll get to the rest of it later. :D One thing that irked me was how it was like you ...

Pengu pointed out a lot of good things, but I think the one big thing is this: Why should the reader care about your speaker? Because as it is, I ...

You have really beautiful hair... *jealous*

Start by generally talking about the subject, narrowing down until you state your thesis, at the end of the first paragraph. Well, this is suggested overall, but I'm guessing that ...

*makes uncomfortable faces* No. - Kel Grenwald Yes, but I've never kissed . I've been kissed before. - Agatha Van Wick What matters most to you right now?

Well as honored as I am, I have to point it out to you guys. Death Machine isn't on YWS, and so, technically isn't allowed in this competition. Kind of ...

You're writing about trich? Interesting. I'd love to take a look. I have no idea what Bek [Mesh] is talking about. :roll: SPEW is Super Pretty Elitist Writers. Why shouldn't ...

Poor Admin... Nate is an amazing admin. All the sites I've been on before YWS, the Admin was never seen and rarely if ever heard from. Nate takes really, really ...