Emerson

I read the article earlier. I guess you have a point with that. Maybe I'm not easily shocked? XD

It may be like anything though? We have some stuff that I'm sure looks real strange to foreigners, but it isn't everyone doing it. (I can't think of anything off ...

where customers and waiters role play themes from manga comics. I think if you pay attention to that line, it's not that weird. It's like over the top comicon.

and I still have to write at least two critiques, I believe? True! But it isn't too hard to do. Critiquing is amazing, because you learn how to edit better. ...

Yesterday people kept telling me I looked French which was strange, so I took a picture. By the way, that white blurb? Not on my scarf, but on the mirror! ...

You sound charming. I should have welcomed you last night! I think I forgot... In any case, welcome to the Young Writers Society. You've already had rules and what nots ...

This mixed with his oh so alluring scent has left me dizzy, but pleased. You're in present tense, so keep it as such. This mixes with his oh-so-alluring scent has ...

Sorry to fill you down with not-critiques. I removed your full name from the post as well. Remember, people can find you if you put your whole name online! Be ...

Thank you everyone! Like I said, everything helps. I seem to remember we mostly concentrated on changes to the working classes (i.e. better housing etc) For kicks, could you explain ...

I think you should unbold the main letters of the title. Yes, it draws attention, but it distracts. Let the reader do the realizing, don't for it on them. Also ...

is heart an abstract or concrete noun? It depends upon how you are using it I guess. Heart is a weird one. Concrete I suppose. Love is abstract, but still ...

*snickers* I couldn't figure out whether to not read this age old thing out of respect or to poke at it for kicks and giggles. It's so flow of consciousness. ...

Welcome people! This site is amazing for improving your skills. I'm improved so much from this site! If you have any questions, feel free to pm me! A good way ...

The title Guttersnipe has a 73.7% chance of being a bestselling title! Because anything you write would be a best seller, love.

I'm going to need you Brits out there to help me... A novel I am working on is set in the '20s. I had to move it to England because ...