Emerson

Yes, well to start I only read the first argument and no posts following... 1. That's just your opinion. Why should I care? 2. You could say that about a ...

This is weird. It could actually be interesting, but I have to admit it has way too many problems right now to even be moderately good. Until I seen him. ...

By accident, Sam and I thought up a character game revolving around the phrase "Hello, my name is..." So, introduce your characters! Hello, my name is Kelly Grenwald, and I ...

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Ah! I am so angry. I wrote up my critique last night, but then my internet decided to quit working. So, without further interruptions, my critique! Diego stood [s]in place[/s] ...

...We have an economy? Yay, review week!

Detox is short for detoxification. a period of medical treatment, usually including counseling, during which a person is helped to overcome physical and psychological dependence on alcohol or drugs. T

Expect the site to crash at random times, and don't complain when it comes back up. :D You know that thing called detox? Nate was helping your (our) addiction.

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Two Words: It's France! D'accord !

I don't know why, but my MCs are always guys. :P That's just how it goes! I could write women, but I never have ideas where women are my main ...

Notes: Thanks for the critiques! If you don't notice any major changes in the previous, it's because I'm keeping them to edit when I'm all done, heh. I can only ...

“All aboard,” he called at the top of his baritone voice, reverberating off the trees and making Jaden wince – every sound was one that could give him away. Is ...

I love the second one a lot! In the first one, their faces look too wide. Try making them more round, maybe? I'm no help with art though, heh, I ...

Bah, McCain is no win for the republicans. :P I don't like any of them to be honest. Which is annoying. So you just have to pick and choose and ...