Emerson

It will be an excuse to write. ^_^ I hope it fixes the problem!

Well I think they would have a patient waiting room and then a visit/family room as well? So as to keep the sick and the healthy apart? Hehe, but I ...

I'm not sure what kind of waiting room you want, haha. I've been mostly in pediatrician waiting rooms and therapist waiting rooms. The therapy ones are fun, though often times ...

Ever since I've joined YWS, what I loved about it most (though at first found difficult to navigate. ^_~) was how uniquely it was set up. I was used to ...

So this is for a school assignment? Well, either way, I'm going to critique it like I would anything else. ^_^ But before that, Welcome to YWS. I realize your ...

Welcome. ^_^ If you have any questions or need help finding something, feel free to bother me! Hope you enjoy the site, and I hope to see you around.

The Chair> Reworking, rewriting, and rethinking never hurts and in fact it can open up places you had not expected. Go for it. ^_^ If you are missing notes, try ...

I like this. But what are you trying to say about the rain drop? ^_~ not to spoil it for you, but you're only describing again! Describing is wonderful, but ...

You seem to already have received a lot of critiques so I hope I still have something worth saying! [s]That[/s] The fist that met my cheek, was it really his? ...

I like how elegant this is, but I think some parts are strange. For example, the grammar doesn't always make sense, so it feels weird. For example: "Onyx eyes; soft ...

. . . #6 is Topic of Your Choice? How ridiculous! I think we later found out that the prompt was one of those sample/trial questions and didn't count towards/against ...

Hello! May I call you Kaye? Welcome to YWS. If you have any questions or need help with something or get terribly lost, feel free to PM me. I'm excited ...

Nice try, Prok, but it doesn't work amazing. ^_~ I think this would actually be better as a poem, especially if you lengthened it, added more detail. It's a great ...

Back for seconds, so to speak. ^_^ Jo walked into the small, brightly colored room, scared and silent. This sentence is strange because I can't tell [I know , but ...

Excitement! I currently have 1614 reviews! Which is a big number, I must say. I will be going for 1700, and hopefully reach that by June 1. That's a total ...