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Re: Misery of Love
Some of these lines could be saved (L6) and made into a good poem. Others are not worth keeping (L12-L14). More than anything, though, please punctuate. It's hard to understand, ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: If a man's born to soar
I am not sure what to start with, so, to make things simple, I will start with the first stanza and go on. ^_^ In my dusty recollections… This is ...
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Really FUNNY "Sexy" Name Generator
I don't like this on a site for young people. Locking.
May 11, 2008 -
Re: mother!
Hello! I edited the excessive punctuation out of your title. It's annoying and unnecessary. ^_^
May 11, 2008 -
Re: Writing Deadlines
I have vague deadlines for myself, or nothing would happen. Of course, I don't meet them, most of the time, but if I do then I'm happy. For example, I ...
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Get over it my friend ch4
Hey Amber! Just a note, try not to make your line breaks so long. I shortened it for you. If it's too long it stretches out the front page of ...
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Is freedom of speech a bad thing?
I think you're misunderstanding the whole point of the freedoms we our given. Generally and at best, my [American] freedoms are ones that are protected as long as my freedom ...
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Questions about "Will Review for Food"
My thread died and I tried to get people to post again, but they didn't. My question is, can I make a new thread? It wouldn't be for anything, just ...
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Hopefully a forum to stay with :)
Welcome Nick of California! Haha. You're one of the many Californians here, now. Feel proud? Or not. If you have any questions about the site, feel free to ask me ...
May 9, 2008 -
Re: rape....
Hey there! Okay! You admit you are new to writing this. And I will admit, poetry is a very hard thing to do. The first thing you should do when ...
May 9, 2008 -
Re: Burma Death Toll Could Reach 500,000
This really makes me want to cry. They're so terrified of outside control they won't let the aide that they need be let in... If they aren't careful they're going ...
May 9, 2008 -
Re: Mist. Mysterious. Mystical. [ignore this.]
Hey Rubber Duck! You can't delete your own stories, and we prefer not delete whole threads because then people loose review points. If you want, you can hit the "edit" ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: writing the first chapter is the hardest...help?
The first thing you can do is ignore it! Honestly! Just write your first chapter, and keep going. Only with some projects can I manage to edit the beginning and ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: Post Character Pictures!
Er - Sorry for the confusion! This has been unlocked, I changed the title and the first post so that it made more sense, and I moved it to the ...
May 7, 2008 -
Re: Bisexuality: straight, gay, or lying?
I love men and I don't intend to rub breasts with any woman. Black tiger, I know, or at least hope, that you do not mean any harm, but could ...
May 6, 2008