Emerson

Hey there! Like Via said, people who give out their personal information aren't cool. Keeping it to yourself is so much safer. And if anyone does ask for your personal ...

24. Post the first ten chapters of your novel all at the same time, because you know they'll want to read it right away. 25. Don't number them in the ...

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Moved to lounge. ^_^

You line breaks are too sudden and jarring. :D And you use more commas than needed. People don't like being told what to do, but with this poem you stand ...

Yes. ^_^ I will move this to writing corner.

Like JFW said, most people speak through body language. Adam has the amazing suggestion of listening to real people - and you should - but not too closely. If you ...

Oh, I really love this. True, I'm going to go through and change some lines and remove things all together, but I have to say, you have some really amazing ...

*chuckles* Amazing idea, Flem.

I read this when you first posted it and had some comments, but couldn't post then. We'll see if I can remember them now! I know I had no real ...

Pah... Give me sometime. I will catch up.

Some of your language here is really good, but in some points (standing out to me most, S1) you try too hard to be poetic and forget to make sense, ...

Aedomir ->> You're in the UK. Stop whining. . Pffft! Great response, Nate! I'm getting a bit tired of this... I want real news? But I still watch, now and ...

Bob... your neck is insane. And I'm reading! Actually I'm not reading that book right now, it was for the pose. :P But it's an amazing book. You should read ...

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