Emerson

Oh, this is too cute. My largest problem is with your meter and some of your line lengths. With poems like these, not only are they dependent on a rhyme ...

010. Dirty, Sloppy Hearts That afternoon, we walked together to Nina’s house. As I walked up the stairs, the wood creaked, whispering to me about how long it had been ...

Hi there! First I'll say welcome to YWS and that if you have any questions feel free to ask me! :) Yes, I am going to be harsh. Forgive me ...

Welcome to the YWS! If you have any questions or need help finding your way around, feel free to pm me. You may expect to get a poetry critique from ...

Don't abandon grammar entirely! It can be used wittily, just like the lack of it can be. I'll respect you if you lack grammar and write good poetry, but if ...

Twit is actually just trying to confuse you... I think. And I believe you start with 1 star? That's a weird glitch.

As far as I know, you don't.

Haha well, I didn't want to be annoying! But I think Sureal pointed out the things that bother me... I assumed the things that bothered me were the bugs. Like, ...

We're getting close to this deadline, and I don't have very many articles! Hurry and write something, before I start attacking random people in chat. :D

Welcome to the site! Everyone else has covered anything I could have said... :( Hehe, but still! I hope you do enjoy the YWS and if you have any questions ...

Ooer. It will take me a while to get used to this! I will wait until the bugs are out to complain, hah. What is great about it is now ...

We're on such a roll! What is this, the third year now? Expect more new members because of that. :D Wee!

The silverware shines like your eyes did when we first met. Who’d have thought soapy spoons, forks, and knives would remind me so much of love? I think the knives ...

Hey Amber! I shortened your line breaks. Don't make them so long, or it stretched out the front page funny. Thanks!

I just saw a preview on TV for another film adaptation of Jules Verne's Journey to the Center of the Earth . For a few seconds, I was excited. I ...