Emerson

I'm back for more. ^_^ I'm glad to see that my review will only be the second! And not, this time, the tenth, haha. Your beginning here I didn't like ...

Then I turned and reached out, she handed me the bag of supplies first. This is phrased weird. You do this several other times, but you seem to split sentences ...

Hello! It took me a while to find this, it seems the link you gave in my boutique was wrong? But in any case here I am, with broom et ...

Hello! Oh my gosh, so. You have come to the right place, because I know me and my friend Sam would love to learn Arabic. The only word I know ...

I like vampires. But they've been too done. Unless you can tell me how this story will make your vampires different than the ones I've seen... No.

ohmigosh, Bechka. ^_^ You're adorable beyond belief. The lack of sleep doesn't show! [yet.]

Aw. Happy birthday, buddy! I hope you have a wonderful day. It's nice to grow a year wiser. ^_~

Pffft. Yes, Master.

I was editing one of my stories and when I hit submit it said, "You received one more review point!" or something. But I was just editing my story... and ...

012. Her Great Flood Tuesday. Nina had youth group. At lunch, I hid my face in my hair. I had never seen her in the cafeteria, but maybe she was ...

I want to experiment with quotes... So quote this? And I quote! Haha, awesome. Quote! Wait... maybe it's quoth? I don't know; quoth sounds like a type of squash ^_^ ...

I just want you to understand me before you examine me. Being that you are not your poetry, I am not understanding nor examining you. I'm critiquing your poetry. There ...

Windshield wipers flashed across the woodland landscape in a hypnotic dance The repetition of "land' annoys me. I think you could get away with "the woodlands in a..." I have ...

Ari! I love you. I already left some kind words in the mod section, but I thought I wouldn't leave this place empty either. You are going to knock them ...

Hello again! run my nail under the nail , allow the paper to fall into my hands. Er, as you can see, you repeat "the nail". I wasn't sure what ...