Emerson

:O Jabs that is so cool you went to Springfield... I should go there! I didn't do much this summer. The most exiting part was going camping with friends from ...

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Hey there! I hope you're having a good vacation. :) Also, I'm glad you're looking for help! Sometimes I think people aren't willing to improve... So I'll give you what ...

I remember the good ol' days when St. Louis was on the top cities. I should start posting more. *sigh* But! This is really cool. Looove the stats. The number ...

Hey there! One big thing that stuck out at me in this piece was that your dialogue wasn't properly punctuated. Here is a quick example of how to punctuate dialogue: ...

Hey there! So one thing that really jumped out at me was the big time inconsistency in this piece. One moment, it's 1am, the next moment it's 3am. I doubt ...

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My main question would be: which POV are you using? First or Third? I've read a lot of articles on multiple POVs and they are almost always about first person ...

Hey there GB! This is an amazingly dark poem. The level of gore is intense and your creativity with kitchen utensils is impressive, so for all that I really enjoyed ...

Hey there! :) I see you're anxious to get reviews. If you're looking for reviews, one good place to check out is the Will Review for Food area. But don't ...

Hello there! So what I love about this piece is that you tap into a very common feeling that people, especially women (of course, I Can only speak for women, ...

Gah, I'm going to be in Uni next time... and Sundays are my busy days. @_@ At least I did a lot for this time! I'm so proud of us!

I kind of lost count along the way but I'm pretty certain I have done 16 reviews. Also, I now have 2,000 reviews in total. Which means I am done ...

Hey there! You said, "I'm considering writing what happened to Elliots mum, throught Elliots Point of View. What do you think?" I don't really understand what you mean about what ...

Wow this is incredibly interesting! I hadn't been expecting all the torturous sadness of an immortal being in love with a human. It leaves so many questions. What special bond ...