EmeraldEyes

This seems a little bit extreme. I think the main character here is a little bit warped if I'm honest. There doesn't really seem to be more than one facet ...

The topic of vampires can be really cliché, but I thinky ou have covered it well here and you know that you are acknowledging the Twilight phenonmenon at the beginning. ...

I think you have really honed into the voice of Gollum here in a scarily accurate and kind of creepy way. :) 'Birdsies, birdsies, so tender sweet,' The way you ...