EmeraldEyes

Hello hunny. New work. new review. YAY! So... nice title XD First of all. :) Very poncy, not entirely sure about the meaning (or at least I wouldn't be if ...

Hi. i don't think this work sucks. XD I disagree with the description. -nods- Firstly: you're a good writer, and what you haven't written does not suck at all. :) ...

Hi. I read another of your chapters didn't I! And then you posted on my wall. Hey Adam XDDD So, this one is as good as the last. Very impressed ...

Hi.. I wasn't sure whether to take this metaphorically or literally. Hmmm. But cold metal bumps and burns against my skin. For some reason I get the feeling this is ...

Hi. I am going to comment on this work generally. Firstly, it was really loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong. Like gaaah it took me ages to read. So my first note would be to ...

Hi I will start by saying: They came in the night. Best opening line I have heard in a while! Simply because it is so simple. :) It's catchy and ...

Hi.. So i was intrigued to read this part especially because of the wood elf. XD You've still got that mature style going. I wonder, are you going to publish ...

Hi. I have read the first part of your essay, although I didn't review it XD Well... You've got big chunks of text here and it is really heavy going ...

Hi! I enjoyed reading this. I am confused as to why you have called it a "song" because it's a novel chapter isn't it? I'm not sure. XD Anyways. I've ...

Hi. So I found it interesting that this was written in the present tense. And the third person. It just felt like... err, strange. XD Second place for him. The ...

Hi.. When I started reading this I noticed it wasn't in the same vein as most of the other works I have read by you. The language was very basic ...

Hi. I really enjoyed reading this, with Boyle and the gang. XD The use of first person POV was a good choice: Even as we spoke I could hear Aoi ...

Hello. So this was a character profile? I don't understand what you're trying to do with this but it was interesting and funny to read. You included the weirdest of ...

Hi. I was confused about this work. Obviously, I understand what it's based on, but at the same time: Within Hell's kitchen back to where the three are eating Is ...

Hi. I am going to be honest: I didn't like this work. There are some things about it that were good, particularly the descriptive sections: The undergrowth was limp at ...