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This poem was very beautiful! I love how it illustrates this topic. The poem itself is very non-conformist in your use of language and illustration. I love how your last ...

Hey, this is my part of a book my friends and i are writing. It isn't much yet, but i want to see what people think of it so far. ...

Wow that was strong! I am in love with this story! I have had a somewhat similar experience... But anyways, here are my critiques. There are a few spelling errors ...

Oh my goodness, that was amazing! It was so descriptive and almost mysterious, and lovely! Your writing style is very unique and almost intoxicating! You wrap your reader in the ...

Overall i thought this piece was very interesting. I love how the first line is so dramatic. It really draws you in. One thing i wasn't to crazy about was ...

Hi people! I hope you like this poem! :lol: There are many things Many words Many actions Many keys to my floodgates "I hate you!" "You're horrible!" A death there ...

Wow. This piece was deep and thoughtful and overall spectacular. I cannot see no flaw here. Your passion for writing is shown in this piece ten fold. If you are ...

This piece seemed... a bit akward, though i am not sure those are the right words. It needed more. I felt as though you were building up to the tension ...

Hey writers! I hope you like this excerpt of my story! This book is my baby, and i hope to someday get it published. Please critique! :shock: _____________________________________________ A few ...

OMG!!!!!! This story is amazing! I lovethe way you illustrate Dania's world. Thee drama really sets in as you read. Your use of vocabulary also helps with the amazing picture ...

I thought this poem was very deep. I thought it needed a bit more. I felt that it stopped short and could go a bit deeper. Also, parentheses in a ...

Hey people, i'm new here. I was told to come here in my first message. Can't wait to post stuff. C U L8R