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Re: Name the Character Above You
Castor. Female, eighteen to nineteen. Has left college for a year and feels completely lost in life. Not gorgeous or extraordinarily beautiful but pretty in her own right. Dark hair. ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: The Genevieve Slater Story
I know I haven’t written that much so far but I have been struggling terribly with the opening lines of the chapter. Just please, based on what I HAVE written, ...
Mar 26, 2009 -
Re: I Will Follow You Into The Dark: Chapter Three
“I missed you,” Jacob murmured into my hair, holding me closer in his arms. It was the only warmth we received, besides the red flannel blanket that we were wrapped ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: Unexpected Love
I think this was great. I like how you made the characters believable, especially the way Leah threatened Jake to not think about the conversation. That was so in character. ...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: Sleepless Roads
Song: Here You Me By: Jimmy Eat World Title: Sleepless Roads Author: Morgan a.k.a Embroswyn15 He couldn’t even say goodbye. It was all so sudden, so completely unexpected and Milo ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: Get An Afterlife
It was that stupid ghost again, following me like a magnet to metal. Why, just because I was one of the few people who could see them, did I have ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Don't Say A Word: Preface
I’d never held a gun before. Its weight was new to me, slightly heavy but with a balance that made it easy for my small, delicate hands to hold and ...
Oct 7, 2008 -
Re: Disney's Sleeping Beauty
this was a very clever and intriguing twist on the classic disney story. I never would have thought of that. i believe that at the end, however, the gore was ...
Oct 7, 2008 -
Re: I Will Follow You Into The Dark: Chapter Two
thank you very much. i'll post the next chapter as soon as i finish it. im glad you like my series so far. thanks again! ~m~
Oct 7, 2008 -
Re: I Will Follow You Into The Dark: Chapter Two
I don’t think I can recall how I got into my room and in bed other than the sweet musky scent of Jacob that seemed to waft around in my ...
Oct 1, 2008 -
Re: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
miss anonymous, this fanfic is heavily related to main events in breaking dawn. if you haven't read it, then if you do you will understand the piece better than if ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
The woods were dark and forbidding, though the moon shone in little rays of pale light piercing the canopy of trees. The greenery still showed its color despite the lack ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Welcoming Freedom Chapter 2
yet another triumph, in my opinion. I loved the emotion and how intense the story got. You bring to light an important topic and you have written it so that ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: Welcoming Freedom Chapter 1
All I can say is wow. That was amazing. Your style of writing is very beautiful and I think you truly captured Bella's traumatizing memories and her emotions at the ...
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: A Spin On Fairy Tales: My Entry
This is my own version of Beauty and the Beast with vampires incorporated into it. It is only the second time I have entered a contest but here is my ...
Jun 9, 2008
