Ember

Prologue: Initiation They say I was born to set fires. Though I denied it, I could feel the fire inside of me cause catastrophic damage to my morals. All that ...

Summary The change that carries man to beast was the one thing that kept the squabbling Aster pack together. It was the one transformation they all loved, despite their differences. ...

I think you came on a little too fast for a first chapter- you explained Larara's life, the fight with her mom, Larara wakign up at three in the morning, ...

I loved this! You weaved together history and humor all in eight stanza's! I really found it hilarious- and I didn't spot any Spelling, Grammar or Punctuation mistakes. I'm sorry, ...

Hey there- I thought it was a good piece. You executed the writing very well and even managed to make my heart beat a little bit. Your metaphors were great ...

Wow, this was very intriguing. I'm not a very religious person, but it sounds like you take pride in your religion and that's pretty awesome! :D I really liked how ...

Times done NaNoWriMo: 0 '08 NaNo Name: N.S. Glanzman Genre: Young Adult Plot Idea: The change that carries man to beast was the one thing that kept the squabbling Aster ...

I think you came on strong, but a little too strong. You explained the main conflict in the first few paragraphs of the story. I know that you must be ...

I couldn't spot any mistakes either on this one! Well done! This will certainly be a good reference for when anyone else needs to write a query letter! -Ember

I found this to be a great piece of work! It had wonderful descriptions and the way you described the characters was very vivid. I could almost feel Hades' voice ...

Your style reminds me very much of Dave Eggers or David Sedaris, in the witty aspect. I really liked the way you wrote it! Sadly, though, I am not a ...

I thought this poem was very beautiful- you created this character, and you expressed his dream to fly so nicely. How he goes through different stages of his life reminds ...

This was a very descriptive piece. You painted each scene intricately, and I liked that about the story. What I didn't quite understand was that the scene that you picked ...

My name is Natasha and I'm new! I've been looking all over for a website geared towards teen writers. This site looks really cool- I'm going to go review now! ...