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"Turnabout" by Margaret Peterson Haddix.. I love her books, but this one was horrifyingly confusing and I had to keep rereading pages before I got the general jist of it.. ...

Oh my gosh, I love this. I don't see anything wrong with this.. like at all. I think it flows well and is just really extremely cute and sweet and.. ...

Emotastic and extremely frightening. Self mutilation, how did that become souch a popular topic? (Ooo, I need to write something about that.. and vlog it too!) I don't have to ...

I like it. I have a strange obsession with just friends types of things. The only thing I suggest is that you add "that" and splitting "I'm" up to "I ...

I like this, a lot. You've got some spelling errors you need to look over, but other than that it was fine. I think he acts appropriately to his age ...

Ooo, this is really good. I mean.. like really, really good. My only suggestion is: And if I ever cry all night because I think that no-one cares, if I ...

Ooo, I really, truly, genuinely liked this. It had perfect rythm. The only thing I see wrong with thise (though I'm not completely sure) is: "Even when I write My ...

That was sad and sweet! I loved it. Your girlfriend is great.. well at writing I mean. Though I do agree with Livinginfantasy.. I'm not sure I would refer to ...

I am absolutley TERRIBLE at critiques. So I tell people if I like their stuff instead.. =] And I did. Very.. *pulls out thesaurus* skookum.. probably not using it right, ...

I was never scared of mosters. I was scared of something though. I was pretty sure if my PJs weren't thick enough, Edward Scissorhands would cut me up in the ...