EloquentDragon

Sir Dacron pressed his horse on through the rain. Thunder rolled ominously above them. It was not often that Dacron felt fear, but now it had wrapped its iron hand ...

This is the second posting of this piece of writing. (ugh) Where is you people's sense of feedback?Sir Dacron pressed his horse on through the rain. Thunder rolled ominously above ...

Here is the very first paragraph of my story, "Scarlet Rain."To view the original excerpt, see here: viewtopic.php?t=72170Please comment, I am not entirely happy with it, and it is the ...

Alright, I have been working on this for quite a while. And it is, trust me on this, much better than the previous 3-6 versions. This is the very first ...