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Elong451

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Mermaid

    *agrees with above said * I love your detail and visual reperesntation in this. i can see the images clearly in my mind. :)

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: What am I sposed' to do?

    thats right!!! do what you wanna do! break free from conformaty!!!! welcome to YWS!!!!! it's good to see another expessive poet and writer!

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Am A Little Fly

    Very adorable for a joke poem. I adore lisps. it's almost like a british accent, you just want them to say more things. My best friend has a lisp and ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Shattered Symphony of Life

    This is some amazing dramatic poetry. I feel the emotions ebing from the rhyme. It is unfortunate that heart break is the biggest cause of the greatest artwork and poetry.

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Chapter 1

    Thank you bella!

    Dec 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: a long night

    This is so adorable. It's like the puppy in your picture is speaking about the humans staying up late. XD Very nice job. I also agree with what Crimsona stated ...

    Dec 14, 2010


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