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Re: Nevada Falls
This is my CW piece for english coursework so I cant develop thsi section particularly, it has to stay shortish but any improvments othwr than lengthening would be great. Also, ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: Racing Wind- Chapter 1- Edited
Hey Izzy Its me again, your stalker. Or rather Heather's :D . Anyway, I think this is the first time i reviewed you on here, and i know you hate ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: Missing - Chapter 1
Hey Maddy Its ella... im bad with spelling names do you like maddy or maddie? Anyway, old me to look at your stuff and so i looked at some of ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 1. Fire & Dark
You can laugh.... Na jokes Izzy Swimming tomorow? X
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: Miss You
Thankyou!! but it did start off as a poem so you know. You can review it if you like... i just like this song. Ella XXX
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: Racing Wind
Hey So i re-read it, and its still good but like before, theres the whole grammar thing but i wont go over that because people have already done it. But, ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Miss You
Ok, two things before you read this: a) this song is unfinished and unedited like most of mine are so dont expect it to be perfect and b) please dont ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 2. The Victim
Usually my chapters are longer than this so i need to elaborate... 3. The Victim That night was the scariest night in my entire life. I will never forget the ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Racing Wind
This is not fair izzy. You said above that you have two sequals if anybody is interested. But before you said i cant read them yet because they are not ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 1. Fire & Dark
Preface Lily had never believed in fate before. She didn’t think of Karma, she had no opinion on religion. She lived in the real world; there were no fantasies she ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Beginnings and Endings
As we stepped into the bright, cobbled street from the alleyway, it was like old times. Ok, i know this is picky. Change the the "it was like" to "it ...
Jun 3, 2009
