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Ella_Mercy

  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Nevada Falls

    This is my CW piece for english coursework so I cant develop thsi section particularly, it has to stay shortish but any improvments othwr than lengthening would be great. Also, ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Racing Wind- Chapter 1- Edited

    Hey Izzy Its me again, your stalker. Or rather Heather's :D . Anyway, I think this is the first time i reviewed you on here, and i know you hate ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Missing - Chapter 1

    Hey Maddy Its ella... im bad with spelling names do you like maddy or maddie? Anyway, old me to look at your stuff and so i looked at some of ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Chapter 1. Fire & Dark

    You can laugh.... Na jokes Izzy Swimming tomorow? X

    Jun 16, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Miss You

    Thankyou!! but it did start off as a poem so you know. You can review it if you like... i just like this song. Ella XXX

    Jun 16, 2009
  • Novel Workshop Re: Racing Wind

    Hey So i re-read it, and its still good but like before, theres the whole grammar thing but i wont go over that because people have already done it. But, ...

    Jun 15, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Miss You

    Ok, two things before you read this: a) this song is unfinished and unedited like most of mine are so dont expect it to be perfect and b) please dont ...

    Jun 15, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Chapter 2. The Victim

    Usually my chapters are longer than this so i need to elaborate... 3. The Victim That night was the scariest night in my entire life. I will never forget the ...

    Jun 9, 2009
  • Novel Workshop Re: Racing Wind

    This is not fair izzy. You said above that you have two sequals if anybody is interested. But before you said i cant read them yet because they are not ...

    Jun 9, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Chapter 1. Fire & Dark

    Preface Lily had never believed in fate before. She didn’t think of Karma, she had no opinion on religion. She lived in the real world; there were no fantasies she ...

    Jun 8, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Beginnings and Endings

    As we stepped into the bright, cobbled street from the alleyway, it was like old times. Ok, i know this is picky. Change the the "it was like" to "it ...

    Jun 3, 2009


Find wonder in the everyday, find everyday language to articulate it.
— Maurice Manning