Ella_Mercy

Yup theres about another six chapters so far, but i need to edit them, and this one, its the longest thing ive carried on with except look left so itll ...

Well i read it ages ago but its still making me cry :( Swimming AFTER school on wednesday :) Xx

Yeh but not the first week :S :) I have put chords on some of them; look at think again or something like that ;) Ella xX

Thanks :) I understand about the punctuation, i never punctuate my songs because then you rule out changing the rhythm at some future point ((which i do a lot)) I ...

I still havnt edited this so please be picky and critical etc etc 1. Jeanie I could always tell when Kip got a letter from Melissa Taylor. There were the ...

Also.... I did read it now ANd now i love you more Its so great! And its amazing. The whole style has progressed so much from the first book. I ...

I love you izzy :) But i kinda need to read the end of racing wind before i can read this properly.... SO pleeeease thats all i will ask for, ...

:) thanks Its someone who's sick of having to listen to her moan about all her failed relationships without actually doing anything to make them work. X

Voila: New improved song with edits AND chords. C* is C with the finger on the B string 1st fret removed C** is the same shape as C* but on ...

Hi =] I'm not going to review your grammar and word order...etc because i think Hawkie got it all =] but this is the general feel i get from this ...

bold = mid 8th and italics = chorus Also i know its not conventional to change the chorus every time but i think it fits. Keep the memory alive Keep ...

3. Friends The pain coursed through my body, twisting and tearing at nerves and veins and muscles I didn’t know I had. It was as if I had been burned ...

Ilove this, the way you actually end each line without it becoming stiff and un-flowing (if thats a word) It actually makes some of it sound like a lyric, (bei ...

Hey Izzy Its Ella :D Stalkerrama. Anyway. So, i read this versus the original version and you changed alot of the grammar and sentence structure which is good. Also Miss ...

I LOVE the theme of this, thats generally all i look at because spelling and stuff is what autocorrect is for :D But i think this is great, and the ...