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Re: Look Left- Chapter 1
This is version two.. i tried to make it less confusing but i think things do become more clear as they go on through the chapters. And you have to ...
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: Look Left: Another Preview
Thanks :) You sbout half the book... but i havent written it yet. I hate writing fillers between action so its taking me ages :S Ella XOX
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: Part one - Tegan.
Save for the grammar..etc as mentioned above, i like the idea :) The name could be slightly offputting aswell, Tegan is a guys/ girls name but you did sort that ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Look Left: Another Preview
That night was the one when I made my mistake. Being with Theo had removed me from the world, I was in a new, dreamy frame of mind, and though ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Denatured - Chapter 1 Part 1
I love the name Squirrel btw :) "It works out. ” THis has either got to be "It works" or "it worked out" or you conflict the tenses :) [[COnflict- ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Denatured - Chapter 1 Part 1
PArt 2! ((Im back :L)) I think I even stopped wanting Ant to be found. Why why why why why?!?! After all that time I really guessed if he was ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Denatured - Chapter 1 Part 1
Hey Eleanor! Ok, its unusual for me to nitpick but voila... a proper review :) I spent three years of my life just trying to stay alive. Gah, i love ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Miss You
Swam, yes :) Lol i set my phone so that i get alerts from YWS so i know :) Ella XOX
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Keep the memory alive
This is one of my few piano songs :) so you can XOX
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Fetus (1)
oh good :) Xx
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: Look Left- Preface
Thanks... this part may not be as good as the previews, because i suck at writing slow parts, so thats why chapters 1-5 ar taking so long. NOTHING HAPPENS! But ...
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 1. Fire & Dark
Thankyou :) Justin runs in after mark... some stupid hero attempt at saving him, which doesnt work :S Thanks :) Ella XOX
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: Denatured - Chapter 1 Part 1
OMG I know her name :) I love it ;) Ooo I like it as well. Keep up writing :) And Em, POST SOMETHING!!! Ella XOX
Sep 18, 2009 -
Re: Letters Chapter 1 & Prologue
Hey. Thanks you for the comments :) But Ive put this one on hold for now... i prefer Look Left and they are both very demanding. I have to do ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: Another Song: in need of a title. Please suggest :)
I just remembered: capo fret 1. Ella XOX
Sep 16, 2009
