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Re: 7. Outdated (part 1)
Hi, This is part 7 of a novel, so you have to read the first 6 parts (which are posted on here) to understand! Thanks for the review, Ella
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: 7. Outdated (part 1)
Wow, havent been on here in ages :) Heres the next part of Outdated, just in case. I recovered my sense of smell first. It was the gasoline. Despite the ...
Jul 21, 2010 -
Re: 6. [[Unnamed so far x] ]]
Thankyou :) Chapters 1-5 are on yws...the rest is in progress ;)
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: 6. [[Unnamed so far x] ]]
I was kind of surprised when the water hit me; of course, I was expecting the fall to be much longer. And for my senses to cut out in the ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: Secrets
Hi :) First, I really like the whole idea you have going, and the recurring theme of "i Love you". The lyrics are really beautiful :) The only thing I ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Good Little Guy
Hi :) TU for the reviews..etc. Just to clear a few things up: Courier New is a gaming site incl. poker Ice cream and Tea is what I eat after ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Good Little Guy
Don’t tell me to Get off my laptop yet I’m learning poker on next doors Internet connection Because you couldn’t be assed Enough to get your own freaking license In ...
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Things come out right in the end
Aww! I love it i love it i love it. Its like the perfect daydream. Obviously, this is a rarity to happen in real life, but its well done: not ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: excerpt- need critique- very rough
Hi! Im Ella :) This is a pretty detailed review, but im bored and i think this could get really good, so :) --> There are some phrases you use ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: 3. Flying [Over the Atlantic]
:) thanks Chapter 4 and 5 are up aswell :) XX
Dec 21, 2009 -
Re: 4 & 5. Because Roses are Red, and Violets are Blue: [Texas]
4. Because Roses are Red, and Violets are Blue: Part 1 [Texas] It was the first day of the semester today. Mama drove me into school in her SUV, the ...
Dec 19, 2009 -
Re: 3. Flying [Over the Atlantic]
3. Flying [Over the Atlantic] It felt amazing. Flying without a parachute. Free-diving. Spiralling. Losing my senses. Free as a bird, soaring on the wind. Yeah I jumped. Yeah it ...
Dec 19, 2009 -
Re: 2. Falling [Over the Atlantic]
I watched as the plane disappeared into the clouds. Taking my baby away from me. It had been hard to say goodbye to her- for in a way she had ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: 1) Outdated
1. Outdated It was raining at the airport. Fat grey droplets pouring down from an invisible shower head. They had started as soon as the taxi had driven away, so ...
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: Counting Hay
Hey! I really like this-- its one of those poems where you dont understand every phrase, but you can link the overall message to something in your mind. Its very ...
Nov 24, 2009
