EllLou

I agree. This was actually a dream that I had (kind of a weird one) and wrote it down when i woke up. So I really don t know much ...

I don't care if my whole 6Th grade class is staring at me right now. I don't care that my teacher is trying to coax me away. I'm not letting ...

Thanks! that really helps. I agree with you on changing my use of words. And i didn't notice that "linger in my mind" is used that much until you said ...

This life that I lead is no life at all. My heart has broken into a million pieces in which I have long abandoned in any attemt to piece back ...

wow, i cant believe how much feeling was in that piece. It was sad but at the same time it was so understandable. So many girls go through that atachment ...