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EliseEllie

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Delusional Love Colors

    Hiya, this poem is a great representation of the emotions you feel in love. The poem is powerful and I just love it! It sends a message and it shows ...

    Jun 30, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: when the bees sleep

    Hey! I read your poem like 3 times. I like the metaphor behind the poem also. Your poem is great and the style of your writing is great and overall ...

    Jun 30, 2023
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: The Wacky Wonders Circus

    Rose, Hiya, this short story is amazing and super fun! I like the long story it tells in such short form. That sounds like I am just describing a short ...

    Jun 30, 2023
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Basement Window | Strange Sights

    Heelllooooooo! First, I want to say how much I love this story. As I read it I got chills! "he silence started to feel deafening." Ahhh it was amazing! The ...

    Jun 30, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Cleaners - Chapter 1

    Wafflelord21, I love this chapter. I like how you added detail but mystery if that makes sense. Like you show them preparing for the job but don't say what it ...

    Jun 29, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Year I Lost One of my Best Friends

    In your story you perfectly expressed feelings of grief and sadness. I love how you led the reader to think your best friend was human than showed that your best ...

    Jun 29, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Year I Lost One of my Best Friends

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    In your story you perfectly expressed feelings of grief and sadness. I love how you led the reader to think your best friend was human than showed that your best ...

    Jun 29, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: variations on a theme of sadness

    I suck at writing poem but imma try anyway. I really like how you compare the different situations you might cry. Happiness, anger, sadness, etc. I also really like the ...

    Jun 29, 2023


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