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Re: Delusional Love Colors
Hiya, this poem is a great representation of the emotions you feel in love. The poem is powerful and I just love it! It sends a message and it shows ...
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Re: when the bees sleep
Hey! I read your poem like 3 times. I like the metaphor behind the poem also. Your poem is great and the style of your writing is great and overall ...
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Re: The Wacky Wonders Circus
Rose, Hiya, this short story is amazing and super fun! I like the long story it tells in such short form. That sounds like I am just describing a short ...
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Re: Basement Window | Strange Sights
Heelllooooooo! First, I want to say how much I love this story. As I read it I got chills! "he silence started to feel deafening." Ahhh it was amazing! The ...
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Re: The Cleaners - Chapter 1
Wafflelord21, I love this chapter. I like how you added detail but mystery if that makes sense. Like you show them preparing for the job but don't say what it ...
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Re: The Year I Lost One of my Best Friends
In your story you perfectly expressed feelings of grief and sadness. I love how you led the reader to think your best friend was human than showed that your best ...
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Re: The Year I Lost One of my Best Friends
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Jun 29, 2023
In your story you perfectly expressed feelings of grief and sadness. I love how you led the reader to think your best friend was human than showed that your best ... -
Re: variations on a theme of sadness
I suck at writing poem but imma try anyway. I really like how you compare the different situations you might cry. Happiness, anger, sadness, etc. I also really like the ...
Jun 29, 2023
