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  • Archive Re: Only the Good Die Young

    It was coming back to her now. Alex with her two friends. One girl and one guy. After Dave had been the first to die that night, after they'd gathered ...

    Dec 15, 2019
  • Archive Re: Only the Good Die Young

    "Dead?" Margaret asked, annoyed that the others seemed to be ignoring her. "No, I can't be dead."

    Dec 15, 2019
  • Archive Re: Only the Good Die Young

    When her calls went unanswered, Margaret made her way up the path. The sticks on the ground were uncomfortable against her bare feet. The others watched as she a group ...

    Dec 15, 2019
  • Archive Re: Only the Good Die Young

    Oops, I totally missed the part where injuries manifest. I’ll edit my post. Because Margaret definitely would be covered in blood as she was stabbed to death. Consider her white ...

    Dec 15, 2019
  • Archive Re: Only the Good Die Young

    Margaret Kelly is a twenty five year old Olympic swimmer. She's won three gold medals and has begun to train for her third Olympics, which she's planning to be her ...

    Dec 15, 2019
  • Archive Re: Becoming the Costume

    "Most people will probably be drunk to notice," said Amy. She was starting to get agitated. "Drunk to notice that we're not wearing costumes." Amy took a deep breath. Why ...

    Nov 12, 2019
  • Archive Re: The Ghost Hunt

    Tara wasn't sure about Silver's claim, but it was better than nothing, and she doubted Gilderoy Lockhart was going to be much help. So, reluctantly, she started to follow Silver.

    Nov 12, 2019
  • Archive Re: Becoming the Costume

    "There has to be a way out of this," Amy said. "I could find help. I can fly ." She thought about how ridiculous the words sounded as soon as ...

    Nov 10, 2019
  • Archive Re: The Ghost Hunt

    It makes you normal. Tara's eyes went distant. She'd never met her father; her mother had left when she was pregnant with her. To save her. To make sure she ...

    Nov 10, 2019
  • Archive Re: The Ghost Hunt

    Hi! I can post in both early this week if not tomorrow.

    Nov 10, 2019
  • Archive Re: The Ghost Hunt

    "Your father?" Tara asked. "Well, let's talk about my father. He's in prison. What does that make me?"

    Oct 30, 2019
  • Archive Re: The Ghost Hunt

    "Well, how is it different?" Tara said. As much as she tried to mask her frustration, it didn't quite work. Still, fraud or not, she figured they were all stuck ...

    Oct 28, 2019
  • Archive Re: The Ghost Hunt

    "Well, I am a witch," Tara said. She realized immediately it was a bad joke. "I'm not. Samantha is. My costume." She took a deep breath, and seriously thought about ...

    Oct 27, 2019
  • Archive Re: The Ghost Hunt

    That twist! Tara's head was spinning. She wasn't shocked, not about Reyes at least. Her first year of college, the CEO was forced to resign because it turned out he ...

    Oct 25, 2019
  • Archive Re: The Ghost Hunt

    Tara felt her heart pound. She couldn't have been the only one to have seen the girl. Judging by the reactions of the others, she hadn't been. Even Reyes seemed ...

    Oct 21, 2019


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