Elinor

Hey Shina! How's It Going! Gonna Do A Review! Preface The bright light of day began to fade and time appeared to become quick. Hmm. Your phrasing is kind of ...

In 1723, Life was very different in alot of ways. But almost everyone held the same values of love and family that we do today. When Madeleine Gray, a seventeen-year ...

Definitely Typing. If you do it by hand, your hand gets sore and such, and your wasting paper and not being very environmentally conscious. If you want to make edits, ...

The brisk night air swirled in the peaceful sky. The night was very frigid compared to a typical September evening in Boston. It was too cold for most typical Friday ...

I think its....bad. I don't know, I just don't like it. Maybe you could make the words 'Young Writers Society' actually on the sword in fancy letters, like its engraved ...

Hello. I'm Ellie. I'll be your reviewer for today! :D I. Title I don't really like the title. I think it is a little childish and un-exhilarating. Maybe you could ...

Hey Forever :D I'm Ellie, otherwise known as ThornedRose. But you can call me Thorn. I'm glad you decided to come to YWS. I have been semi-new myself, but I ...

The world around the building was engulfed in flame. Seems a little purple proseish / confusing. Try : Fire raged through the city, but, for some reason, the building was ...

4/10. Its cool but not very creative

Hi, I'm Ellie, and I'll Be You're Reviewer For Today :-) People say when your about to die, your life flashes before your eyes. What? They do? How would anyone ...

Hi, I'm Ellie, and I will be your reviewer for today :-) Ganan's joints bludgeoned him with a dull, aching sensation as he slipped out of the tub of hot, ...

Hello, I have come to continue my lesson. Now, the second part is breathing life in to your characters. Making them seem real, authentic and 3-D. Not just cardboard cut ...

Hello. Today I would like to instruct in the fine art of writing. Obviously, the core of any story is our characters. To create a good story, we need to ...

Hi, I'm Ellie, and I'll be your reviewer for today :D He only went inside the café because it was the first place he’d spotted where smoking was allowed. Bad ...

The long golden age of piracy is finally coming to and end. Ever since the death of her mother, Madeleine Gray's life has slowly been spiraling downward. When her father ...