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Re: The YWS Logo
I actually like the Quill idea. It gives a more sophisticated, fancier appeal to this website. I'm sure a lot of us are hoping we could become Classic authors, and ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: Disney Doodles
Heh. Here's a bunch of my Disney drawings from the years 2006 to 2008. I tried putting them in a kind of age order, the first being the oldest, but ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: What I wrote...
Hey UserName! What's up? I'm here to review your piece :-) I struggle to find the right words. The right words to describe or to explain what? In a foggy, ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: Twisted words
heres something i just threw together last night. its supposed to be three poems in one. the whole thing, the right side, and the left side. it can be read ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: My Main Character
Okay, This Is really, really good. There are only a few things that bother me, though. Distance of Forehead To Eyes I don't know If you know this, but your ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: girl
Okay, This Okay. I do have a few nitpicks, though. Finding A Light Source I like your attempt at trying to use shading, but It's shaded all over and you ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Hiya!
Hi! I'm sweetie_pie94! I'm a very nice person. I live in the country in a small town. I love photography, writing, and drawing. Read my blog to get inside my ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Saying Goodbye
Okay, this is really short, but I'll try to do what I can. If you don't know me, I'm Ellie. I'll review the lovely poem I'm sure you've written. So ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Purple Prose Help
Okay, so I'm pretty sure In our first grade English class or where ever we first learned about writing stories, we were told to describe. A common mistake that I ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Tick. Tock.
Tick. Tock. Tick Tock. Tick Tock. Your adolescent heart punches at the anticipation of those last few moments. Last few moments of what? Your heartbeat falling in with the rhythm ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Gray's Garden, part 1
I don’t remember how I died, or anything that happened before. ... I'm a little unsure about this opening sentence. On one hand, It makes me want to find out ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: What Am I?
Okay. This is my first attempt at reviewing poetry, so beary with me. I am a hardened lump of play-do- The Dash after 'do' can be removed. And If you ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: [closed]
Hey, Shina! I'm going to Chapter 1 now, like I promised. All I can remember of my days in early childhood were the raindrops that seemed to fall endlessly on ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Character Development Part III. Execution
Sorry for the delay in getting this posted. I had been busy and forgot about it. But Here It Is. Okay. In this third and final part, I'm going to ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Interested In How YWS Is Coded?
O_o Wow. That's a lot of complicated stuff. Did you come up with yourself?
Jul 16, 2009
