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I wrote this rather than writing my U.S. History essay. :] Naughty! Haha, just kidding. Anyhow . . . My mind taunts me with rapid transitions from swirling masses of ...

The Thorn, the Branch, the Rose, the Bush These are all the components of Rose. Beautiful beyond the world, but They hide and poke. They slide and choke. Beautiful as ...

In those time when you held me and told me that you loved me. I don't really understand your use of 'those time' i think you mean 'those times'. And ...

Name: Lauren McCullough Age: Eighteen Gender: Female Species: Vampire Appearance: Long, thick black hair with bright red highlights. Large, piercing blue eyes, which are like pale sapphires. Her eyebr

These are all really beautiful. I'm going to be giving it a gold star. But anyway, I only have a few nitpicks, which is rare of me. On Picture Number ...

A/N ~ Sorry for the French at the end, but it was written for my French teacher. "Les papillons d'or" means "golden butterflies." Hey, No Problem. French is awesome :P ...

Shina, when I read this I almost fell over in my chair laughing. You are very, very funny. >.> Um yea, CAPS AREN'T ALLOWED. And wow, how in the world ...

Hey Kristin. Here on YWS I have alot of nicknames. You can call me Ellie, Thorn, Rose, TR or Teddy, which ever one you prefer ^.^ Anyway, that is really ...

The mountains sing a song unknown Maybe you could rewrite this sentence as: When the mountain sings an unknown song - this would make this a little less confusing. The ...

I'm writing a novel called Into The Depths I don't really know what to say, accept that it's about Pirates and Romance with a lot of action and adventure mixed ...

Hey Sare, how you doing? ^o^ I'm Ellie. The girl sat at the kitchen table, head in her hands. Okay, I think your hook does need a little bit of ...

Vivid scene of an angels’ light. This is a vivid scene of an angels light : Graves that open up at midnight. The devil’s smile hidden in a picture. For ...

Hey Bright! Welcome To YWS! How are you doing? My Name Is ThornedRose, but you can call me Thorn, Rose, or TR :-). Are you working on anything right now? ...

6/10. It Sounds Awkwardly Worded, Plus I don't really like Buttons. Creative, Though. ^o^

This looks like a very good idea. I have a thing for Historical Fiction novels, especially novels with real people as the main characters ^o^. World War Two was such ...