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Hi, Ilkay. Welcome to YWS! My name is Thorn, and I can see that you reviwed a piece of mine. The posters before me pretty much covered all of the ...

I am not going to do a full, line by line review like I usually do, because, reading this through, I see that you are making the same mistake over ...

Sitting upon a weathered bench, We watched the sunsets fade; I think you should probably find another synonym for 'weathered'. I know what you're trying to say, but it's defintion ...

I have joined - my account is the same. Look forward to seeing all of y'all on the back up this week!

Hey, you like Scott Westerfeld? That's really cool - Uglies is probably my favorite novel. I'm Thirteen too - You can call me Thorn. William Shakespeare? What are your favorite ...

Welcome to YWS, LRJack! I'm Thorn, I'm thirteen years old and currently writing a novel. What about you. What kind of stories do you write? Short Stories? Novellas? Novels?! Are ...

Hey. Great Poem Doyle! I did an assignment just like this about three years ago - right at the beginning of fifth grade. I like your analogies, your comparisons, your ...

Hi! I'm Thorn. Mars covered a lot, so I'm going to be brief. YWS has a 2:1 ratio, which means that you should review 2 works before posting one of ...

:D Sir, I think that I have taken an immediate like to you. You like Muppet? That's cool, I've been searching forever and ever for a Muppet fan. So, anyway, ...

Hi, Marion. I'm Thorn, and welcome to the Young Writer's Society. This is really a great place - I've learned so much about writing! It's been a great experience for ...

Alright. Thorn here. I'll get straight to the review. tonight ! Alright. I was a little confused as to what sort of context you were using this in. If it ...

I Wanted To Say by Tiffany Alvord Hun, first I would like to start of the with the fact that you put your first and last name in this post. ...

CHAPTER TWO Madeleine Gray’s Journal ( Continued ) My eyelashes fluttered open, and I found myself in my bedroom once again. I was almost certain that I was actually awake ...

CHAPTER ONE Madeleine Gray’s Journal 1 August, 1721 Early Morning The sky was a vivid, pale orange, the hue darkening as the sky became farther and farther away from the ...

Her family is dead, I thought that'd be kind of obvious. And as for the telling, I'm not really sure what to do about that because I don't want her ...