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Hey, silented1, what's up? I really enjoyed your poem. It had a very interesting voice. The only problem you seem to have is your grammar. Your ellipses (...) can really ...

Hey Babygirl! What's up? First off, I think your poem is well written, and you don't have any errors in grammar or punctuation that I noticed. The major problem with ...

Hey Oxford, how are you? Here are a few ground rules you should follow. :arrow:Don't t4lK liiK3 tHiiS or use CAPS, l337 or chtspk. Anywhere. It's annoying and very hard ...

Well, maybe "She's my sister," would flow better, I don't know. "was" doesn't make since, because even though it IS in past tense, the sister is still alive. If this ...

Take away some of the skills and talents. Make him so he's not so perfect at everything. Maybe he has a certain deformity, or his eyes are brown rather then ...

This is for tnme22's flash fiction contest. A stream of fresh, crimson blood trickled down Tom's leg. He was just twenty-four, enjoying a hike with his friends. As he lay ...

I know, right? I only saw the first Star Wars movie a few months ago. I eventually got around to seeing them all - but they really are great. C3PO ...

Hey, how are you doing? I see you've heard about the 2:1 ratio, so here are some ground rules that you should follow. :arrow: Don't t4lK liiK3 tHiiS or use ...

Somebody’s gotta die, Take your pick. The way you phrased this dosen't seem to really have much punch. Maybe you can try to add more before this. (i.e. You won't ...

Are we going to be recievning points for the reviews and welcomes and such that we've been working on in the past few days?

Hey! I love Classics, and I am hoping to read more. I've gotten myself into the Sherlock Holmes series, I started reading Pride & Prejudice. I've completed two classic novels ...

Any fans out there? If yes, who are your favorite characters? This also just a place for general star wars discussion. My favorite character is Anakin.

(Okay, Four Spots Saved. That makes for a total of 5, including myself. We just need 5 more)

Premise It's 1985, and all over the world, there is hype about a raffle. A worldwide raffle that seems to good to be true, it's prize being a three-month, summer ...