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Hey, Shina. What's up? This was a really good piece; you're definetly an amazing writer. Now for the nitpicks. . . Its screech will pierce you. 'pierce you' here dosen't ...

Chase the guy and return the wallet. What would you do if Dracula came into your house?

Kat, I loved it. I really, really did. You had an excellent language flow, expcept for the second line, which I thought broke it up a little bit. Your grammar ...

Hello Pudin. I really enjoyed your poem. It was definatley better than anything that you've ever wrote before. I do have a few nitpicks, though. In a lonely room she ...

Hello. What's up? I really enjoyed the piece, but the reason I did was the reason I disliked it, as well. Before I get to that, here are the nitpicks. ...

Ha, that was great. ^_^

Hey again Empress. I read this through, and I saw that Stella pretty much got everything, but I still have one nitpick. Otherwise, It's an extremely well-written piece. a girl ...

Hey time! Everyone pretty much covered the rules already, so I'll be quick. You're thirteen? So am I. Sci-Fi and Fantasy are pretty cool. Is there any thing else you ...

Sounds good - YWS is getting better every day. :-)

Hello, Empress. Here is your review, as requested. I'm not going to be nit-picky today, but I'll sum up how I feel about this piece. I didn't enjoy it, but ...

Thanks ^.^

5/10. I don't really get the second part. Seeing death as he end of life is like seeing he horizion as the end of the ocean . - David Searls

For rating work, we had that on the old forum, and I think Nate is still working to bring that back. It's only been a week, and he's still in ...

Who clicked on happy? >_>

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