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Hey there God. Let's take a look at this, shall we? I found it to be quite good. I loved the plot, the mood and the feel, but I do ...

Hey there CreativeFreak! Let's take a look at your poem, shall we? ^.^ Math I see the numbers Stretching across the paper. ^ I love this line. However, I think ...

____________________________________________________________________________________ Very long ago, in a faraway land, there was a princess. She was beautiful in every sense of the word; her large eye

I Love at first sight is easy to understand; it's when two people have been looking at each other for a lifetime that it becomes a miracle. -Amy Bloom The ...

Hello, Brybry dear. Before I begin the review, I just want to make one comment. In a novel, there are two kinds of Intros, Prefaces and Prologues . Introductions should ...

Hello, LoVeLeSs! How do you do? Allow me to review this quite excellent poem. :-) fixed grammatical errors in green It will be dark , and It will be cold ...

Hello Wildfire. How do you do? Your poem is very short, but I don't think that matters, does it? It's the quality that counts. Now, let's get to the poem. ...

xD Yes, she does suck pretty bad. And she plugs her ears and runs at the slightest critisim of her books, which I hate the most. She doesn't understand that ...

Now, this is okay, but I don't really like the font that you used, as it sort of gives an "amateur" look to the whole thing. I'd recommend a standard ...

I'm not going to say much, considering that this was taken by a four year old. They're absoultey phenomnal for a four year old, but a tad too noisy and ...

Hello, Darth Maul! Allow me to review your very excellent poem. I read it through and I absolutley loved it! The content was perfect, and it kept me hooked from ...

Hello, Alfreto! How do you do? Dear Mr. Somebody, ^ I'm only one sentence in, yet im confused. Who is Mr. Somebody, and why should I care? Who is he ...

Hello, Channon. How do you do? Preface- Pristine shoes clicked against he cold tiled floor. ^ This first sentence is very, very confusing. I don't know what your trying to ...

Hey Anima! How are you? I don't believe we've met before, but allow me to review your poem :) I am feeling dark. 'Dark' Dosen't seem like it would be ...

“Jack, can’t you just tell me what this is all about?” “No Jane,” said the man driving the car, handsome and dark haired. “It would ruin the suspense of it ...