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Hello Vox. Going into your story, I expected it to be terrible. Why? Well, your title wasn't exactly the snappiest one out there. I know you're supposed to judge a ...

Who would Batman be without the Joker, or Harry Potter without Lord Voldemort? There would be no conflict for Batman or Harry Potter to overcome, and thus no interesting tale. ...

Star Wars: Episode III The Cast: Anakin Skywalker: thechosen1` Padme Amidala: Pampered_Princess Obi-Wan Kenobi: ForceMaster Emperor Palpatine/Darth Sidious: master_in_diguise Master Yoda: LittleGreenP

Hey Ellie! I loved your poem, but I just have two problems with it. melted sunshine For some reason this just doesn't sit right with me. The sonud of it ...

Hello there! This poem was quite wonderful. It is close to perfect. You have true talent. However, I do have a few nitpicks. First, I don't really understand this simile. ...

Hello Peanut! She is alive. In a state I cannot imagine but alive. ^ Hmm, I'm not quite so sure about this opening line. First off, it's written incorrectly. In ...

Heya Forestqueen. I've seen you around chat, but I don't think I've ever reviewed anything of yours, so here we go! ^^ Chapter 1 “Hey, Rachel.” I heard a voice ...

Nate, this will be awesome, don't get me wrong. However, we will have to kill alot of trees to procude this. Perhaps making it into an E-Book?

I only have two nitpicks and you can see the thunderheads across the valley, I'm not so sure about starting a sentence with 'and'. If you want to keep the ...

P R O L O G U E § The city burns behind me. “You need to get yourself out!” Mother’s words echo in my memory, and the minutes that ...

Hello there. I totally agree with anima said. However, he failed to mention that you do get one freebie, but you have posted three literary works and you have no ...

I think you should add something about the titles under your name, such as, "Novice, Junior Writer," and when you can post your own custom title, as well as what ...

Hey Springs! Your poem is alright, but it definitely needs a lot of work. You wrote this two and a half years ago, so I'm not going to be too ...

On the thirty-first of October that year, the village of Hallow was blessed with the coronation of a new king. The young man who inherited the throne was only sixteen; ...

I would not want "A Galaxy Far Far Away" To get deleted.