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Re: Lonely?
Hey Mo. I love this, and there is not much to say. I do have a few nitpicks, however: The Eyes One eye is super little, and the other is ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: 2012 End of the world?
No. Nobody even knows how the world is going to end, and besides, all of the theories have been proved to be impossible. Like someone said, if we do die, ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: Guess Who! (PG?)
Hello Jennafina. These drawings are all very good; let me say that you are a very talented artist. However, I did notice a few problems. I don't know if these ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: Prime Death
Hello. This such a beautiful story. However, Before I begin my review, I would like to point out that you have this story posted two times. Once is enough; just ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Get Off My Wall
Hello Amber. This was indeed a very cute little poem, but I found that it lacked flow and poetic form, as it read more like a diary entry. You have ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Mid Fall's Charm
Hey there Kamas. First off, your photos are extremely large. Shouldn't you have re-sized them before you posted them? Secondly, all of your photos are extremely out of focus. They're ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Leaves (drawing)
Mo, hello! These were both very beautiful drawings, and I adore them greatly. However, just let me give you my nitpicks on them and then leave :P 1st Photo This ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Slide - Photography - [Updated Dec. 6]
June, these are actually quite amazing. However, I do have nitpicks on the 2nd, 3rd, and 5th photos. 2nd I don't really like the way you conveyed the pages blowing ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You(13)
Hello there. Here is your review, as promised. Chapter 13 “Gary, say something , p lease!” Isabella stood up and looked at Gary’s trembling (trembling seems as though its a ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: The Maradonia 'Saga'
xD Yes, she does suck pretty bad. And she plugs her ears and runs at the slightest critisim of her books, which I hate the most. She doesn't understand that ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Elinor's Critques
Removed.
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: Cloudscape
I agree with Juniper. Your angles are very shaky, and that makes everything seem a little out of touch. Sometimes the photos seemed too busy, and I couldn't really tell ...
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: Big changes to topics
*squeals* Nate, this is going to be awesome.
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Prologue to Alastair
Hello! I read this story over a few times, because it's very well written. It reminded me a lot of Pride and Prejudice. “May I have this dance, Miss Kathryn?” ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Random YWS Browser Stats
Firefox has to be the sturdiest thing in the world, a it's fun with the new Personas. Internet Explorer is a pain. I know, right? I just made the switch ...
Nov 28, 2009
