Elinor

Hello Galerius. You reviewed me, so I thought that I could return the favor. For the most part, this was a very well-written poem. I agree with what Juniper said ...

Hmm. Your poem is better, but not that much better. We understand the "love touch" metaphor now, but you still didn't change it. I'd recommend doing that so future readers ...

Elinor Brynn Colors: Pink, Black, Yellow, Ice Blue Genres: Historical, Sci-Fi, Romance Activities: Writing, Baking, Movies, Shopping Extra: No emo poems about how much life sucks.

I'm in *has already done 7 reviews today*

Not that I completely agree with Snoink, but I do believe it is very preachy. Too preachy, even. It does has potential, but you don't have to be so flowery ...

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Hello Chevy. This was a very sweet and sad poem. However, I felt as though it read more like a fragmented piece of flash fiction then a poem. Although I ...

Hello Amy! This is a very awesome poem, and I was laughing the whole way. I do have a few nitpicks though. My comments are in italics. One time is ...

Hello there! I agree with Hawkie. This story was good, but it was way too preachy. The moral was incredibly obvious, and it seemed more like a lecture. God loves ...

Hello there Lily. Here is your review, as promised. Cassie had never trusted beautiful boys. ^ I don't like this sentence as a hook. It's kind of bland and it ...

Hello Emi. It's a pleasure to review another one of your poems. It's very short, but does that matter? It's the quality that counts. Sometimes the shortest pieces of work ...

Hello Emi. This is a very beautiful poem. However, I do want to mention one thing before I begin the review. Looking at your profile, it appears that your review ...

Hello there. This was quite a well written poem, and I could find nothing wrong with it except for grammar. Each stanza which you've written consists of four words and ...

Hello there. This was a good poem, and you were very poetic and had good word choice. However, it's title was very confusing. Your poem is about the sun and ...

This is quite a beautiful piece of work. However, I do have two nitpicks. Line Quality I think that I should mention something about how thick and blunt the coloring ...