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Re: The Messengers: 1st Chapter
Hello there! Let's take a look at this story ^^ Hey everyone. This is just the very first little part to my book. It's extremely small, but I would really ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook
Six months ago, I was an awkward, pesky little twelve year old who detested poetry. Who wrote half-way decent short stories, who didn't know what showing vs. telling was. Writing ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Bubblez
Wow Channon. These are absolutely beautiful. I don't really have much to say, because I loved everything about it. It seems like it could be the cover a home and ...
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Re: More of My Drawings
Hello there Daydreamer. I agree with Searria, as your drawing style is very interesting. However, that does appear to be problematic, in a sense. The first one has a neck ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: The Life not Lived
Hello there Bittersweet. This was a beautiful poem, but it was confusing. Especially at the be beginning, I feel as if I'm reading a few separate poems. In other words, ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Hopes and Dreams
Hello there Forest. Here is your review, as promised. To start off, well, It has potential, but the ending sort of falls flat on its feet. You say that you ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Welcoming El finito
Hello, El Fintio! Welcome to YWS. We're pleased you could join our fine website. What kind of stuff do you like to write? Are you an avid reader? Here are ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: MeowMixed ist hier...!
Hello Rachel, welcome to YWS! You know, you came to the website for the exact same reason I did! I don't think you'll be disappointed, because it's really a great ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: 'Ello, Addict here!
Hello there! Glad to see you on YWS! I'm sure you'll have a great time. Hey guys, I'm AddicitontoFiction. I've done a few reviews, but I'm still trying to figure ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Hi all!
Hello there Alicia! Welcome to YWS! It's funny that you've writing since you were 13, because that's about the age I am now. I hope you'll enjoy it on YWS. ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Featured Member December 2009: Kamas
Congrats :D
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Kama's Photography Exhibition - [Updated Jan 16, 2010]
Hello there Kamas! These were very good. First Photo: I really like it, but I think you should have gotten less of the fat tree bark that was closest to ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: A House, A Home.
Hello there! I don't think we've met, but nevertheless, allow me to review this fine piece of work! A plain white farm house. A soft valley ringed by hills that ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: To Be a Proton
Hello there Ellie. Let's take a look at this poem, shall we? ^^ We're studying protons right now, so this should be interesting. They live in a tiny world Of ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: A Reflection of our Newbie Selfs
Exactly one week from today, I will have been on YWS for six months. In honor of that, I have decided to create this thread. It would be awesome if ...
Dec 5, 2009
