Elinor

Hey, this is a really good poem, and I appreciate the fact that you were able to insert such a powerful piece of art in only six lines. It just ...

Hello Mr. Knightley! I really enjoyed this poem, but let's break apart the nitpicks, shall we? If I were the wind, I’d fly. This contraction is confusing, and it kind ...

Hey Hawkie! Ellie here. This was actually very a decent poem, and I don't have too many problems with it, but I feel as though that there were are few ...

And ah, Elinor -- this is a prologue, not a first chapter. Cheers *Goes back to read post* So sorry, I meant to say that it read more like a ...

Hello Jasmine! I enjoyed this, and I couldn't find very many problems with it. However, it seems as though you improperly quoted a lot of words. Holiday Inn should be ...

Hello, Elabrave! Welcome to YWS! Are you enjoying it so far? It's cool that you're from South Africa, a girl from my school went there to study! Just so you ...

Hey Lilly! These were all really good. First Photo: I really liked this, as it was very creative, but the few loose pennies were kind of distracting, and I'm not ...

Hello. This was a cute story, but I have a few major problems with it. First, the story was very generic - too many things about it fell flat. It ...

Hello Jiggity. This was very good, even though it seemed more like a first chapter then a prologue. I think this could be shortened down even more, considering that you ...

Hello there Glory! Welcome to YWS! We're so glad that you could join, and I hope to see you around! How long have you writing? How did you find YWS? ...

Hey June! As always, your photography is amazing. First Photo: This one was much better, and believe me, I actually like the ankle and the fact that you fact that ...

Thanks Nate ! Haha, this is going to be so awesome :)

______________________________________________________________________________________ “It’s a no, Christian. We need the money.” Christian Scott sighed as he glanced down at his knapsack, knowi

Hello there anima. Even though your poem was well-written, it was cliched and not very original. It follows a typical plot of a sad poem; girl falls in love, girl's ...

Hello there Lord. These are very good, but I do have a few problems. Firstly, you should re-size your photos before you post them. They're extremely huge right now and ...