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Hey again, fellow Hunger Games actress. Anyway! This was a very good sketch. Your work with the hair, lips and eyes was excellent. Your shading was good, but I thought ...

Hello there, fellow Hunger Games actress! :) Here is your review, as promised. It was a little boring at the start, but then it got better. Your descriptions fell into ...

Wow. A very interesting story. I loved almost everything about it, and it was very interesting and cool. Since this a long one, I'll be be posting the review in ...

Hello Pudin! These are all very good, and they most definitely are not amateurish. First Photo: Good, but I think you should have focused a bit more on the stem, ...

Hey Kristin. First, welcome to YWS! I would like to point out that you have 2 posts and 0 reviews, and here on YWS, we have a 3:1 ratio. This ...

Hey Shina! I remember reading the other parts of Dream Catcher , and this was very good. However, I have a few major problems with this piece. The Flow I ...

Hello there Amy. This was a very good set of photos. First: I like this one, but I think you should have shot it an angle so that the items ...

Hello Jayden. I really liked this poem; it was charming, mysterious, and it left me wanting more. It makes you wonder if the girl a person, a spirit or ghost. ...

Hello there! This was quite a perfect story. I loved your characters, I loved the plot, and I loved the brilliant pacing. However, You did have problems starting out; It ...

In 1719, just three pirate threats remained in the Caribbean. As they were the most evasive and dangerous, a retired Admiral was called in to aid the hunt. Three years ...

Hello there. This is a really beautiful photo. I liked the tint of sun in the background, as it perfectly contrasted with how cold it must have been, even though ...

Hello Cletus. This was very good, but what happened to your line breaks? This all one big block of text, which is bad for any kind of story. Now, onto ...

Hello Cute and Clumsy! Welcome to YWS! That's cool that you've been writing for so long - so have I. Believe me, YWS is a great place. You should join ...

Wow, Sachiko. This is a beautiful piece of work. I really enjoyed your simple writing style, and the fact that you used little dialogue tags.The present-tense is quite artful, and ...

Hello Mars! These are all very good. I love short poems, because they show that something doesn't have to be long to be artistic. First poem: This one was perfect, ...