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Hello Napal! This story was just alright. I had a lot of questions when I first read it through, and there were a lot things that did not add up. ...

Wow, I can't believe that this is the very first work that you've posted on YWS! :D Anyway, you had a rather good start! A few main points: :arrow: Reading ...

The rain is defiantly great. I Love it the best during summer, when it's warm and calming, not freezing and mixed with snow. I also especially love the scent and ...

Wow, Rascalover! I can't believe this! For a first time poet, you're very good. Maybe you just have a bit of that natural talent? ;) Anyway, onto the poem. I ...

SAY IT! Two-Face. Harvey Two-Face. A young Jedi named Darth Vader betrayed and murdered your father. Maybe if you wrote it down. Nah, I can’t spell it. Alright, his name ...

xD Snoink This made my day.

Hello Pacific Sky! A few tips! First, please try to not abuse the smiley faces. They are distracting and they make you seem very unprofessional. Secondly! Before you post your ...

Hello, welcome to YWS! I'm sure that you'll have a really fun time. Drop me a PM if you need anything, alright? I'd love to critique a story of yours ...

Hello Oliva! Welcome to YWS. I hope you'll really enjoy it. You play the flute? So do I! You know, you're exactly the same age I was when I joined ...

Hey there TemptedFiction :) So you've been on YWS for a few days. How do you like it so far? Please PM me if you have any questions, or if ...

Welcome, confused! It's great to see that you've returned to YWS :D I know you'll enjoy it. If you ever would like something to be reviewed, just send me a ...

I'm kind of hard, but hopefully helpful! :D ;) She's very hard, but hey, she's Snoink and her reviews help a lot!

I'll be in the car -_- My family and I are going down to Florida, and we decided to drive. It's alright though, we'll be staying in a nice hotel ...

Hey, alright story, except there were a ton of easily correctable errors, such as typos and grammar mistakes. Once you proofread them through, I'm sure that you'll catch them. A ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! We're so pleased that you could join the site. Everyone pretty much covered the basics, but I still have a few links which may be ...