Elinor

Eden "I see," I say quietly, taking out an arrow from my quiver. The beetle who was at my side croons. I turn. "I almost forgot you were there!" I ...

Hi there Grin. No exclamation or smiley faces like in my usual reviews. I'm not in the mood for it all. This was your dream? I too have had very ...

Mr Knightley, I was having problems and for some reason your photo wouldn't upload to my editing software right. So I picked a different Kiera photo. I hope you still ...

Theria I buy my cinamon roll, and when I sit down I notice that pretty much everyone else has arrived. And then I see Ben. And his black eye. "Dude, ...

(I'll be in the Eclipse Guild) Eden I smile, brushing my hair out my eyes. I'm still trying to get used to how real everything seems in here! "Of course," ...

Hey, thanks Giant. I'll see if I can get around to reviewing your story either today or tommorow ;)

Theria "I've heard about it," I say, taking a sip of iced coffee. "I personally think that it sounds really cool. You?" Riley nods, and I put my phone away. ...

Hi Fiction! Welcome to YWS! It was really good. Have you ever written poetry before? Even if you have its pretty impressive. It was short and sweet, which is exactly ...

Good job, everyone! Looking at the leaderboards from last month, I'm wow'ed. I think I got around to about four reviews or so yesterday. This is so awesome what people ...

I like the name, but it just sounds a bit intimidating to pronounce. However, any of the slight changes which WD suggested would all be really good.

Hi again Rune! It's cool that you like YWS so much, and again, I'm really sorry that your email got hacked. Ah well, at least you get to start up ...

Hi Valentine! Welcome to YWS! I love your screenname, by the way! You've joined just time for it to be in season :P Do you have any favorite authors, or ...

Hey since no one is starting this sucker I figure I will. Theria I press the button and the last sheet of my english paper comes out of the printer. ...

Eden Level thirty-five, finally! I jump into the air in satisfaction, feeling a wave of energy through my bones. This is because I have just learned the ability to command ...

Hi Radid! I don't have the time for an in-depth critique right now, but let me say that I really liked this. Your title was catchy, your poem was nice ...