Elinor

Hey! Since Light_Devil already critiqued your grammar, I thought I would talk about the characters and plot, okay? The characters seemed kind of blah and not very distingushable. They just ...

Hi Halcon! I'm Elinor! I'll try to get around to reviewing one of your stories in a bit, okay? ;) I hope you enjoy your stay. *hands a cookie* Welcome ...

Hi Olaf. This was alright. It's got a lot of potential, and I want to like this so much, but your writing style kind of killed it for me. Your ...

Hi Conrad. I don't have much to say, because this was really, really good. This poem is one of those cases where I think description would ruin the piece. Without ...

Hi inkwell! Are you new to YWS? If so, welcome! This was very good! I agree with Matt Bellamy. You have a fantastic word choice, and a nice rhythmic flow ...

Hey there! This is a really cool drawing. I like how you had darkened red around the edges of the heart, and then sort of faded it out, like a ...

Hi Tiffany! How are you? My fingers trembled, my eyes darting nervously around the crowded streets, searching for the perfect target. This is kind of a run-on sentence, no? The ...

Hi Chocochip! Welcome to YWS! This is an interesting piece. When I say interesting, I mean you cover interesting topics that have real potential. You execution, however, wasn't the best. ...

I like this! However, I think that it would be better served without the girl. Her arms are kind of wierd, her body out of proportion. You can try to ...

Aww, Mo! This is adorable. I really like the reflection, but I agree with Lava about the water droplets things. My main problem is that there is not enough focus ...

Bolt, do you have a specific picture you want? Or would you just like me to come up with anything I can think of?

You know, if the two periods was a typo, you can always get an administrator to change it for you.

Hi Snakefang! Welcome to YWS! So cool you could us. Do you have any stories that you want to post? If so, click here . Also, here at YWS should ...

Hi Hippie! Yours is done. I tried the sparkly border, and it looked a bit wierd, so I did pink sparkly text instead, okay? Here ya go!

Theria "Well," I say innocently, "I just wanted to hang out. I mean, it's Saturday, you know?" The rest nod, but they see through my blushing cheeks and instantly know ...