Elinor

Couldn't find a fox playing with fire, but I googled 'fire fox' and got this. Hope ya like it, Fox!

Hi Amy! Here is your review, as promised. Don’t stop, never stop This line just doesn't seem to cut it for me. It kind of makes me think of the ...

Hi again Aristotle. Well, this poem was a bit better. I especially like how you've woven them into a continuous story. First you spoke about the sunset, and now you ...

Hi Aristotle! I'm surprised; this was pretty good. This was your very first poem? You have quite a bit of talent, m'dear. Anyway, nitpicks! As the sun sets to reveal ...

Hi there Walk! Are you new to YWS? If so, I welcome you and thanks for letting me drop by and review this poem. It was okay. I wanted to ...

3/10 Too busy. I'd stick with one or the other.

Apollo, yours is done!

I don't know, maybe it's because there is so much emphasis put on reviewing? For instance, if you review, you'll get more reviews. If you review, you'll be an active, ...

Name: Alissa Claw: Sky Rank: Hunter Description: A small cat with a crisp white coat and forest green eyes. Personality: Very sharp and clever. She thinks quickly in situations and ...

Eden I sigh, thinking everything through. Even if we did die, it would just be like a game, wouldn't it? These weren't are real bodies. Back at home, I was ...

Hey Edith! I hate to be the annoying reviewer who drops in and actually gives you a serious review, but hey, it should help you in the long run, right? ...

Eden "I could send Beetle out there," I offer. "But I don't know if I want to risk it. He might be powerful, but he's still relatively inexperienced. Should we ...

9/10 very adorable

Theria I am the last one to put on my headset, but I register quickly so I can join the others. "Enter your username," says the game. I think for ...

Rated for Sexual References. _________________________________ Okay, so in the current novel I am writing, there are a scene which I envisioned. Now that I'm getting close to actually writing it, ...