Elinor

Hi Sarah! I really liked this poem and I only had a few minor things that I wanted to nitpick this. I am playing a game that you made for ...

*sigh* People are getting lazier and lazier nowadays, it seems. I, for the record, do not like auto correct. Sometimes if I have the name a fictional place in a ...

Full of your usual brillance, Mr. Kylan. You had some great imagery, and this poem followed and very interesting and cohesive plot. Where did you get the idea, may I ...

Title: Into the Depths Pen-name: Elinor Dawnwood Focus: Anything having to do with pirates or the sea would be cool.

Hi! I liked this! However, I do have a few tiny problems with it. Please refer to comments, and the corrections I have made in green. Who is my soulmate ...

*bump* Only 6 more spots left! Keep 'em coming, guys!

"Liked" this thread. The main problem I see is that a ton of people don't capitalize 'I' when reffering to themselves. I mean, what's so hard about that?

Eden As I struggled to stand up, I could feel thick, wet, tears rolling down my dirt-stained cheeks. There was no choice but to retreat. As a leader, I had ...

Hey there! Here is your requested review! This was a pretty good piece. I didn't have many problems at all with this poem. You had fantastic imagery and good description ...

Selina I looked up from my book. Zuko and Buttercup were fighting again . I sigh, moving over towards them. "When are you going to learn some manners, little girl?" ...

Hi TripleTravelTales. I'd love to review this, but it's way, way too long me. I did a quick word count check, and this is 5,452 words, which translates out to ...

AspiringAuthorA..M. and gsppcrocks10

It should be added that 18+ is a mandatory rating. If your story has any content that requires an 18+ rating, it must be rated as such. For instance, racy ...

Fox, I'm finished. I just did antimelrose's poem, and Kanen, I'm getting to yours.

Hi Fofxire. How are you? This story has a lot of potential, and I was interested when I began reading. However, your execution was not the best. What do I ...