Elinor

One word: Awesome.

Fashion Designing in Paris? That sounds awesome. Anyway, welcome to YWS! I already saw one of your designs and gave it a critique-you have talent, m'dear! What are some of ...

Chicago, eh? That's where I live too; it's the bomb, isn't it? ;) Anyway, welcome to YWS! What kinds of things do you like to write? Are you more of ...

Hi! This is really, really good. I keep imagining that dress as real-it would be so gorgeous! I only have one nitpick, and that is to, please, please make it ...

xD Snoink, I didn't think you were serious when you said this would be the title. Anyway, watch this space for a critique. -Elinor

Ah, okay, I wasn't exactly sure what to make of it haha. I guess she'll just carry it around with her for the time being. Or perhaps Eden wants to ...

*Just so you know, Ranger, you have Eden's powerful enchanted bow-so you might want to make some note of that*

Yeah, to add to what Ayumi said, you should probably make note that the painting isn't yours in the original post-otherwise that would be considered plagiarism. Also, please be more ...

Ooh, this is nice. I agree with what sophiesays said about the bow-it does create a very nice effect. I can see what you trying to do with angle, but ...

Well, no. Because there are only twelve participants that players are controlling. There are twenty four participants in the hunger games. We'll be the upper half who survives the longest, ...

Once one more person joins we can start this sucker! :D

Hi! Sorry that this was delayed. I've been very busy. School can bite, ya know? ;) Anyway! To the review. This piece struck me a bit as kind of bland, ...

Alissa I scratch my ear, thinking of what Jesse as been up too. I close my eyes and begin to send him a message. Jesse. My Son. It takes him ...

Just write out the link on a piece of paper and type in to the address bar?

It's okay, not something I would have thought of. Neat though! -Elinor